Wow I'm really tired of this.

Okay guys, since you all seem so keen on proving that I'm not 15, I've created my own question for it. All you have to do now is post whatever you find faulty about my story and I'll gladly give you an explanation for it so I don't have to keep looking back at previous questions, it's just way too much work! Lol. Have at it guys, I'll give you all explanations, just tell me what you find unbelievable and I'll give you a valid explanation. I hope you all have a wonderful day.